tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-43784876983689299532024-02-06T20:29:12.321-08:00Shannon on Writing, Rewriting, and FilmmingThis is a blog where I share my experiences in art, specifically that of writing and filmmaking.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-33646127037332762162014-02-05T15:54:00.003-08:002014-02-05T15:54:57.181-08:00Wizard World New Orleans 2014: The Cons of being Self-EmployedSo, here's an unpleasant truth about art: if you want to make any money with it, you have to work.<br />
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Like real work - all nighters, hard labor, and marketing. <br />
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I'm lucky that I know where to market my cooky webseries, <i>The Adv. of Keith Flippen, </i>and that is at sci-fi cons. It's great. I get to go to big nerd events and talk about something I love with other people who may be interested.<br />
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Let's face it. <i>Keith Flippen</i> isn't everyone's cup of tea. But, it is a very specific cup of tea, and I can work with that.<br />
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Wizard World NOLA won't be the first Con I've worked. Or second. Or even the first Con with <i>Keith Flippen</i>. But, Wizard World NOLA will be the biggest, and perhaps, most important to the series.<br />
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But working a Con isn't all fun in games. In fact, it's quite tiring. You spend a solid day, with no breaks, talking, promoting, informing, meeting, and socializing with every person you can. Now, we're going to be selling, which is another can of worms. There will be taxes to pay, and books to keep, and deal making. Not only do I have to be filmmaker and fan, but I have to be a business lady.<br />
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First and foremost, I'm hoping to achieve exposure. We have reached the end of our limited network, and it's time to expand. Videos can't go viral without views. This is a great opportunity to bring Keith Flippen to a larger local audience. And a larger audience will only benefit the show long term.<br />
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My second goal, is to try to bring in some much needed capital by selling merch. The awesome guest speakers at Web Weekend said web series make money in three different ways: advertisement (only happens with high numbers), sponsorship (again, a high number investment), or merchandise. We firmly fall into the merchandise category. While ad revenue and sponsorship may be something available to use down the road, we're really going to make money off selling stuff.<br />
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Creating merch is a whole other aspect of a working filmmaker that people don't consider. I had to figure out the cost of printing DVDs and Blu-Rays. Figure out what the hell we could reasonably sell. What would sell. And what we could afford to make. Find money for shirts, shot glasses, and stickers. (All these things costs money, on top of the money we spend securing a table, electrics, and passes at the con.) I had to figure out how much we need to sell to break even, how much to sell to to make money, and how much money before we cry.<br />
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This is another reasons Cons are such a great fit for us. It's gives us an avenue to sell our merch.<br />
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Why do we need to make money?<br />
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<i>The Adv. of Keith Flippen </i>cost roughly $10,000 to make. Without paying anyone. And not counting merchandise. Or any marketing. To continue, we're need find a way to support it. Yes, we are planning on using grant money. And yes, if it looks feasible, we will do another Kickstarter campaign. However, I do not have unrealistic expectations for how much money we can raise though those two avenues. And according to my calculations, I'll only be able to raise half the cost of season 2. <br />
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This does not mean the end of <i>Keith Flippen</i>. But, things like Wizard World hold the key to our success. So, if you're coming to Wizard World, stop buy our booth. Say hi. Tweet about seeing us, and buy something. Support the Adventure!Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-19642492116212371282014-01-31T09:57:00.001-08:002014-01-31T09:57:50.724-08:00Bronies: The Perfect Look at Unexpected and Unaccepted SubcultureSo, I watched the documentary <i><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2446192/">Bronies: The Extremely Unexpected Adult Fan of My Little Pony</a></i>. It's a good flick. There's nothing groundbreaking in it. Yet, maybe I'm wrong. It's a film that's goal is to demystify a subculture that is discriminated against. And I realized, that it brings to light so many issues that I have problems with in our society.<br />
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I have watched <i>My Little Ponies: Friendship is Magic</i>. At least, everything available on Netflix. I wouldn't call myself a Brony, but, I enjoyed it. It's a surprisingly solid show. I'd been intrigued by the design, and then the rumors about how good it is, which lead me to sitting down and powering through it. It left me pleasantly surprised. The show is all around excellent. The animation is unique and quite good. The voice acting is spot on. But, it's the writing that carries it. It's very well written, and not just for a kid show. In fact, it's the "kid show" moral lessons that can often hold it back. Even so, the morals are often well worked into the episode so they don't come across as preachy.<br />
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In the end, a combination of excellent marketability and good TV makes <i>MLP</i> a runaway success. It's not surprising to me that it would develop a fandom. The backlash against the fandom isn't really that surprising, either. Fandoms have been criticized for years, be it anime or Superman or <i>Star Trek</i>. Though, many, more mainstream, fandoms have become accepted, it seems that the haters have moved onto this one. But, this fandom is pretty unique to a younger generation, and in the age of "bullying," it makes sense that the fans would want to defend themselves. (Also, I can see why John de Lanzi would rally to its cause.)<br />
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One of the most interesting things about<i> Bronies</i> is it shows fan culture in a positive light. Whenever I would tease a friend or describe someone as a Brony, I never intended it in a negative way. To me, a Brony is a lighthearted person who was proud to wear a Rainbow Dash hoodie, and was generally above average in intelligence, and probably in his early to mid twenties. My kind of people. I never once though of a Brony being a pedophile, or a creepy guy living in his mom's basement.<br />
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A lighthearted person, who is proud to wear a graphic tee of their favorite kids' show, who's smart, and happy describes just about any fan boy or girl. Fandom is about a group of people sharing their love and joy for a single artistic project, be that a book, movie, TV show, or video game. It's an accepting culture, that embraces everyone's differences, because everyone involved in a little bit different too. And there should be no shame in that. We don't shame someone who listens to the Beatles all the time. Or goes to the movie and is a basement critic. Why should we shame someone who goes on to create fan work? Or makes new friends because of a common interest?<br />
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Most conventions are happy places full of oddballs who all share in the joy of being oddballs together. And that's what I love about it. Even if I'm not really a fangirl myself. It's a great film to watch for someone who's never been to an Con, and to help understand what goes on there better. And that's what I enjoyed about <i>Bronies</i>.<br />
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But <i>Bronies</i> is more than showing a fun and loving community. It goes through a list of reasons why we shouldn't be so against the subculture. And their list falls in line with certain ideals I have.<br />
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The first is the idea that <b>children's things are less</b>. So, a lot of backlash comes from the fact that this is a children's show. It's marketed to young girls. Not to the family. Nope, straight up kids. The show wasn't designed to please parents and children alike, like many successful animated films. It's a show with nothing but kids in mind. But, the show doesn't talk down to kids. Nor, does it create sub-par work because of its demographic. Yet, as a society, we somehow think that because it's target audience is youth, it's less important, less valuable, less influential than something for adults.<br />
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I HATE this antiquated, Victorian, bullshitty line of thinking. It boils down to the belief that children are lesser than adults. Children are humans too! And last time I checked, they can feel all the emotions an adult can, if not more because they haven't been jaded. Our first feelings are our strongest, otherwise, we would all forget our first love or the first time we lost someone dear. Children are observant and smart and capable of drawing conclusions about the world around them. Dumbing down content for children is stupid. And the assumption that all things are dumbed down so that "kids" can understand them is equally stupid.<br />
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Look at children's literature. We have complex and compelling stories for all ages. <i>The Giver</i>, <i>The Hunger Games</i>, <i>The Fault in Our Stars</i>, etc. Children's films work the same way. Look at <i>Up, Finding Nemo, </i>or really any Pixar film. You can't tell me that's not just as complex and compelling at most movies aimed just to adults. This prejudice against children's things exists in all art forms, and frankly I'm sick of it. What we enjoy as youth has just as much impact on our adult lives, if not more, than what we enjoy as adults. Come one, I bet you can remember your favorite show as a kid better and with more fondness than your favorite show from five years ago.<br />
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But back to the Bronies doc.<br />
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Not only are Bronies "weird" for liking children's things, but it's particularly bad because they're men interested in <b>Girl</b> things. Excuse me? I think that may be the most chauvinistic, back ass comment about the subculture so far! Because the content is feminine, because it features primarily female characters dealing with problems often associated as "womens problems," it's not acceptable for men to watch this. Bullshit. This is just something where feminism dies a little. And don't pretend that the animosity towards Bronies isn't a gender roles thing.<br />
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The popularity could come from the fact that the show has just the right mix of adventure and empathy. The documentary even goes into what the show excels at. And those things are genderless. (Though <i>Bronies</i> never comes out and says this, it is implied.) The fact that there are well rounded female characters in almost all roles doesn't mean that only girls can like them. A good character is a good character regardless of sex. (It just happens that there are less female good characters.) Just like children, women are human. We all have the same feelings, regardless of gender.<br />
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Yet, nay-sayers complain that <i>MLP</i> can't be a good show, or a show worthy of devotion because it's a LITTLE <i>GIRLS</i>' SHOW. Throughout the doc, the show is repeated described as a show for young girls, little girls. Not children. <b>GIRLS</b>. And that somehow makes it worse. If it were a pirate show geared towards young boys, I guarantee there wouldn't be as much backlash. But it's not. Society views a show aimed at girls to be even less than a show geared at boys. And that is repulsive.<br />
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In fact, I think the majority of the backlash against the community comes from the gender issue. It's the unexpected "male" community. It's the fact that grown men are watching, though there are many women who enjoy the show, that seems to be more accepted. The boy issues doesn't particularly surprise me since most fandoms are predominately male. Though, when you read about the Brony subculture, they seem to dance around it.<br />
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To me, this just means that there is a generation of young men growing up not viewing women as different, just as human, or pony, and that is something we should be happier about. (And not to forget the Pegasisters, girls who can enjoy unconventional, well rounded female characters.)<br />
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The show left me pondering subcultures in general. Wondering about how society views fandoms, and how wrong that is. And at some point I'll have to look at the contrasting gender dynamics in fandoms (strong female characters, but women can't be "geeks"). In the end, it ended up being a very insightful hour and a half of my life, and a doc that I would tell all my friends to watch.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-17039165272560087382014-01-22T11:53:00.000-08:002014-01-22T11:56:10.319-08:00A Crew of Women - Keith Flippen's Feminine TouchSo, here's an interesting fact about Keith Flippen. Nearly 53% of the crew consisted of women. It's something I'm tremendously proud of, but, not something that I think is recognized. Especially since the content of the show is very masculine.<br />
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Writer, Director, Producer - Shannon Kitchens<br />
Queen Calamitious/Fight Director - Shelly Johnson Rucker<br />
Penelope - Rebeca Hollingsworth<br />
Zombie "Latte" - Renee Suttles<br />
Art Director, Associate Producer, Special Guest Star - Sarah Hutson<br />
Associate Producer, Special Guest Star - Leigh Traverse<br />
Guest Star - Lisa Smith<br />
Camera Operator - Zylena Beck<br />
Boom Operator/Post Sound - Jamie Doyle<br />
Art Director/Make-Up - Ashley Osborne<br />
Art Director - Colleen DiCosola<br />
Costumes/Art Director - Hope Kitchens<br />
Assistant Director/Art Director/Make-Up - Cheri Cerio<br />
Make-Up - Julie Vader<br />
Special Guest Make-Up - Danielle Huval<br />
Production Assistant - Madison Hutson<br />
Production Assistant - Madeline Trosclair<br />
Production Assistant - Megan Ray\<br />
Script Supervisor - Suzie Hudson<br />
Assistant Editor - Selena Muhoberac<br />
Episode 2 Choreographer - Caree Llawellyn<br />
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Twenty-one women worked on the production of this show. Women worked in every department, and were even department head and producers. The entire Art Department consisted of women.<br />
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I'm sure having all these ladies on the set impacted the show, if only in a very subtle way.<br />
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Yes, I know there is a masculine tone to the show. However, it passes the Bechdel Test. Yes, there are two named women: Calamitious and Penelope (or Calamitious an Kaizoku). Yes, they have a conversation together (it's like the 2nd scene in the series). And it's not about a man. It's about Calamitous nefarious plan to capture the plot device, and how she needs Penelope to do this. This is again repeated in episode two with Kaizoku.<br />
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I'm okay with the masculine tones. Besides, gender identity is something I like to play with. Like, the masculine expectations of Victory and Keith (and their almost romantic partnership). I like keeping Penelope smart and sexy (because I am firmly convinced, she is actually the smartest character on the show). The Professor borders on effeminate and is a homosexual character. Queen Calamitious is as brutal as she is beautiful.<br />
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There's an interesting story behind Queen Calamitious. In the original concept, she was a he. I made the call to change the character to a female because I had an actress in mind for the part. My co-writers were surprised at first, but during the pilot, there was no time to really account for the gender swap. So, her dialogue stayed very masculine. At the time, I didn't really know this.<br />
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When we started drafting the first season, I found her character changing. There was something different about her, and I couldn't quite place it. Her voice just wasn't the same. She was, for a lack of a better word, girly. I brought it up with my writers. They didn't understand at first. So, when I asked how they came up with the original voice, and they answered, well, it was male. My response was, "Then write her like a man."<br />
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The thought of gender making that much of an impact on character is baffling to me. It reminded me of something George R.R. Martin said:<br />
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I made a very interesting, and deliberate, choice by visually sexualizing my villain. She's a very pretty girl, yet, she never uses her femininity to get what she wants. Instead, she forces it with masculine violence and will. Her minions cower before her. She never uses sex as a means to get what she wants, nor, really any other female stereotypes. She's not lying nor deceitful. She's not quite or submissive. She's not maternal nor girlfriend material. Really, the only stereotype I gave her was a sexy outfit. I wanted that dichotomy of visual femininity vs masculine actions. (And Shelly did an excellent job breathing in a regal air to the character, adding to her femininity, without using stereotypes.)<br />
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On the other hand, I worked very hard at pulling Penelope away from being a "girlfriend" troupe. And I'm lucky that Rebecca is such an amazing actress because I don't think I could have done that without her. Penelope is a sex object, that shows no interest in sex (unless its to her advantage). She constantly resists Victory's advances, and while "dumb blonde"-ish, she's an expert escape artist and a xenolinguistic. She also, is one of the best fighters in the series (I mean, come on, she's the only one who takes out any zombies during the final fight scene. She requires TWO zombies to take her down.)<br />
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Why am I bringing up all these gender roles and such for Keith Flippen? Probably because I am a woman in film. Because I get mad that my work gets written off because it's not about "girl issues."<br />
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Women are frequently kept away from heavier workloads on sets, often confined to make-up and costumes. And while women did do those roles on my set, it was a regular site to see three girl running around with large flats and power tools. Girls moving lights. Girls with boom poles. Girls behind the camera. <i>And no one thinking anything of it.</i><br />
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So, I am super proud of my set, and all the women and men who worked their butts off to make the show what it is. And I hope to continue to work on sets that don't find it strange to see so many girls doing a traditionally "man's" job.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-18513363622291950472014-01-15T16:13:00.000-08:002014-01-15T16:13:00.023-08:00The Purge, and the Biggest Reason It FailedLast night I watched <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2184339/?ref_=nv_sr_1">The Purge</a>. It's a 2013 horror movie of little note. The summary: In a future America, one night a year all crime is legal, allowing for a catharsis of violence, and a reduction in crime the remainder of the year. Upper middle class, suburban, white family, headed by Ethan Hawke, has made a comfortable living selling security, and on the night of the annual Purge, feel safe. Of course, they're not. The youngest child, a son, decides to help a random man on the street. This invites the group of masked killers to pursue the family for harboring their victim. The once impenetrable home security that Ethan Hawke so proudly sold, is breached and the family must fight for their lives.<br />
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The concept of <i>The Purge</i> is quite interesting. One day of sanctioned crime. Any crime it seems, yet the movie restricts itself to murder. This, of course, would be the most frightening aspect of the night to a upper middle class white family. I, on the other hand, immediately thought of several other crimes that could make an interesting story.<br />
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Which brings me to why this movie failed. As you can tell from my summary, I can't even remember the characters names. I call the MC, Ethan Hawke, because that's really the only way I can identify him. His character is completely lackluster, and the rest of his household is filled with upper middle class white troupes. Rebellious and horny teen daughter. Slightly smarter than average, but maybe not because he makes so many dumb moves, son. And a wife. Whose sole purpose is wife and mother. She does not exist outside those roles.<br />
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Now, you may be thinking that I'm about to come to the conclusion that it's the lack of characterization that makes this movie awful. And while that certainly didn't help it, I don't think that's it. In fact, I think it's the setting.<br />
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We know very little about the Purge from the movie. There is a little bit of exposition, in that it seems to screw the lower class because they cannot afford protection. Also emergency services will be offline during the 12 hours the event takes place. No hospitals, no fire department, no police. Yet, at the end of the movie, as the clock strikes the hour of the end, police sirens are heard in the background. The other bit of info we know is that Ethan Hawke's character is quite wealthy, and lives in a gated community. Which is probably quite secure and not really affected by the Purge as other areas of the country. Then we are forced to follow this family, that is not a reflection at all of the majority of American families, who are basically victimized for "good deeds." I can't even say because they're kind (they're not). The good deed doesn't come from anywhere other than a means to advance the plot. Because, if they never allowed the man in, then there would be no movie. They're victimized because the plot calls for it.<br />
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However, if we took a the concept of the Purge, and set it just about anywhere else, the story becomes much more interesting.<br />
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What is the Purge like in one of those lower class families that can't afford protection? Do they join in so that they are not slaughtered? Or do they booby trap their house?<br />
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Also, murder is actually a fairly rare crime. Thief is much higher. So by this logic, wouldn't just a middle class family, or even a lower middle class family be worse off? They make just enough money to have nice things, so they have items worth stealing, but not enough money to have high end security. Seems to me that they would be the most targeted economic tier.<br />
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How about in a hospital? Just because the ER is closed, doesn't mean everyone in the hospital is kicked out. You could have doctors and patients going on rampages. Or people desperately trying to get in to get helped. Or people trying to steal pharmaceuticals. That seems like a terrifying place to be during this event.<br />
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Then there's emergency services. The sirens hit the roads as soon as the Purge ends. This means, that the police and fire departments have people waiting so that they can be dispatched at the end of the Purge. And of course, reporting to work during the Purge is deadly, so they are probably there all night. Yet, another more interesting story.<br />
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Besides emergency services, there are other companies that probably require employees to stay overnight during the Purge. There is a live television feed throughout the event. This means there's a TV station with employees working through the night. What about what happens to them? To have to work the most dangerous night of the year? Is the pay like quadrupled and worth it? Is it a Deadliest Catch deal? Or are they forced to or lose their job?<br />
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There's also humanitarians. What about churches? Red Cross? People who devote their lives to helping the poor? Are they out roaming the streets? Offering help to the wounded? Providing protection? What hells do they face?<br />
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In the credits, there's a brief report that 200 people in Austin participated in the Purge all at once in town square or whatever. THAT is a more interesting setting than what we got!<br />
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Why are these settings more interesting? Because the setting already has <i>intrinsic conflict</i>. If you are committing a crime, that's a conflict. If you cannot protect yourself because of economic status, conflict. If you are trapped somewhere, conflict. If you're stuck in a well secured, upper middle class house, well, the conflict has to come to you. And it didn't feel natural.<br />
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Personally, I would set the story in an office building. With a small group of friends trying to commit embezzlement. They could turn against each other, and then they have to fight over anyone else who may be in the building. Security? Others seeking shelter? Others out for the wild ride? My husband votes for the same story, but set in a lower middle class home. Embezzling, while trying to stay alive and guard your home.<br />
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Why did <i>The Purge</i> choose the setting it did? I think it's laziness. It's easy to write about a bland, upper middle class family. I'm sure the writer was trying to make a statement on how no one is safe, and that even the rich can be targeted. A statement that the person selling security isn't even secure. A statement about how we can't trust our neighbors. Plus, it's easier. It's easier than thinking up traps. It's easier than coming up with dynamic and unique characters, challenged to do something more. It's easy to think that the Purge is all about murder instead of the plethora of crime that would actually be going on.<br />
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I would like the write <i>The Purge 2</i>. Use this quite interesting concept, and really take it somewhere. Now, does anyone know those producers?Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-51733404343164286962014-01-08T11:59:00.000-08:002014-01-08T11:59:29.204-08:002013 - The Year of Keith FlippenSo, it has been a very long time since I posted. And that reason is simple: I made a Web Series.<br />
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For me, 2013 was the year of Keith Flippen. It literally took up my entire year.<br />
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In January, I remember wondering around Best Buy on the phone with one of my co-producers, discussing Kickstarter. I was at Best Buy because I think we'd gotten gift cards for Christmas. January was the month I began to take the project seriously. Our 48HFP was buzzing. Everyone involved wanted more. I knew that meant we had something on our hands.<br />
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February comes, and my co-producers and I put our heads together to build our <a href="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/938751429/the-adventures-of-keith-flippen-a-zany-sci-fi-web">Kickstarter campaign</a>. We set a goal we thought we could make - $9,000. It was also the minimum we'd need to produce this beast. While our concept may be great, and our design very hockey, it still costs a chunk of money to produce anything of that scale. So we fretted, and tweaked, and come March, made it live.<br />
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The timing of our Kickstarter was deliberate. March and April was already packed with travel as we would be touring our Pilot at various festivals and Cons. Every weekend during the campaign, I was out busting my chops promoting, networking, and working. I had some amazing events, such as screening at The Chinese Theaters. And my birthday was smack in the middle, so I got some time to relax.<br />
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May meant pre-production. Finishing the scripts. Creating sets. Scheduling. All that stuff that comes before the camera rolls in order to things to be a smooth as possible. Of course, this wasn't without hiccups. Tempers ran high. Egos were hurt. People learned what they were made of. In the end, we had everything as ready as it could be for filming, more or less.<br />
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June and July was the main month of production. Four weeks, 23 hours a week, in the dead of Louisiana summer, in a warehouse with no AC, we filmed. And filmed. And filmed. We were pushed to extremes, and we had a great time. And amazingly, stayed on schedule. We didn't have to schedule additional filming days, and we rarely ran over. It was pretty magical, and something I'm damned proud of.<br />
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August was a bit of a break, but then we threw ourselves into post-production. Editing, music, effects. A seemingly endless amount of work and footage to comb through.<br />
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October brought our release. Additionally, we got to participate in NOVAC's Web Weekend and receive critical feedback from industry leaders, and promote ourselves at CONtraflow all the in the same weekend. Then we went live.<br />
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November and December meant the intensity was up as the post team struggled to keep up with the workload. I failed my Nanowrimo, but kept on schedule. My parents visited me for Christmas so I could keep working. I spent the evening of the 30, sitting at our music guy's house waiting for the final score to export. Which at least meant that I got to enjoy ringing in the New Year since Jan 1, 2014 marked the season finale.<br />
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For the last year, when ever someone asked what I was doing, my answer would be, "Working on Keith Flippen." Every free moment was spent working on the project. I've even started answering the questions "How are you doing?" with "Keith Flippen" because it's been a state of being for me.<br />
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The Adventures of Keith Flippen runs a few minutes shy of an hour, which puts it at feature film length. Meaning, for around $12,000 and a lot of gumption, in a year's time, I made a feature. That is an amazing feat. Something that I am quite proud of.<br />
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And while 2013 has ended, the world of Keith Flippen has not. I'm busy working through DVD production, and trying to rally the teams for Wizard World New Orleans. 2013 may have been the year of Keith Flippen, but I'd like to see 2014 the year everyone can't stop <i>talking</i> about it.<br />
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I'm not sure what the future holds for my show, but it holds a lot of me. I know I can do amazing things. And this year, I plan to. I have so many ideas for new web series, new short films, new feature films, new crafts, new everything. I'm ready to push forward, and I hope, that this year can only expand upon everything I've already built.<br />
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<a href="http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLqJWBA63Gxgnooq4yMO8jk4kB79Cu80kT">For anyone interested, you can watch the entire season now!</a><br />
<br />Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-20354380424809768372013-03-01T14:47:00.000-08:002013-03-01T14:47:15.723-08:00Hello, and yes, I'm still alive.Well, I've been meaning to get back to this for a while now. But, well, let's just say things have been quite busy. And this blog was a reminder of things of the past that I missed, and things that are changing.<br />
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It seems that 2012 was the end of the world for me. Because 2013 is certainly exploding with changes. There's something brewing in my life, and I feel that this is the year everything will change for the best.<br />
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I've been meaning to do a blog about how much I kept to my New Year's goals and what I plan to do this year. But alas, I didn't. I was too busy. <br />
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Remember that winning <a href="http://shannononwritingandrewriting.blogspot.com/2012/10/winner-of-new-orleans-48hfp.html">48HFP</a>? Well, it has a Kickstarter page now. Take a minute to check it <a href="http://kck.st/Wbijhx">out</a>.<br />
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Most of my writing has been put on hold. I've poured my energies into <em>The Adventures of Keith Flippen</em>, and it's eaten all of my time.<br />
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(Most sadly of all I never got to finish my Sci-Fi Red Riding Hood Cape. Good thing there's still time for that.)<br />
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Anyway, I hope to keep this more updated. To those who've been following me, thank you. And consider spreading the word about Keith Flippen. It's going to be epic.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-68011119987167651092012-10-02T19:57:00.000-07:002012-10-02T19:58:04.912-07:00Winner of the New Orleans 48HFPSo.... Besides this post being super late....<br />
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Ahem.... So in my last <a href="http://shannononwritingandrewriting.blogspot.com/2012/08/been-busy.html">post</a> I talked about what I'd been up to, and one of those things was the 48HFP. Now I love 48. I've been competing for four years. I have a great team. We made a great film that we loved. But we never thought, in our wildest dreams, that this would happen.<br />
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We won <a href="http://www.48hourfim.com/neworleans">10 of the 17 awards</a>*, including Best Overall. Which means, our cheese ball little sci-fi adventure serial will not only be shown at the <a href="http://neworleansfilmsociety.org/pages/detail/31/film-festival">New Orleans Film Festival</a> (holy moly! And we're in Louisana Shorts 2 *cough*) but we'll be competing against all the best of's at Flimapalooza in Los Angeles! We have no expectations of winning, but are just excited to be grouped with the best of the best - to say, we were there among the greats. It's so amazing.<br />
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I am also personally honored because we won Best Director. I totally teared up when I heard my named called for that. I'm still stunned.<br />
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I also learned sooo much from this year's competition. I watched every film this year, finally being able to make it out to all the screenings. And I will say, that there were some really fabulous films. Makes it even more astonishing to us to be ranked with those other wonderful filmmakers.<br />
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This is my 4th year doing 48HFP, and every year I learn something about film making and myself. I learn how to do something, and take all the things I did wrong in the past and chuck them out the window so I can make new mistakes.<br />
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Which leads me to something I never thought I learned about 48: how to make a winning 48.<br />
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1. Don't make a film to win; make the film you want to make.<br />
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Long before there were even nominations for awards, my team and I were proud of our 8 minute flick. Why? Because no matter what happened, we loved our film. We were proud of it, and we never once thought about "winning" while we were making it.<br />
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So, Friday night I pulled the genre "romance," and cringed. We talked about genres to throw back, and romance didn't make the list. We weren't afraid of romance (we were afraid of drama), but we weren't enamored with it either. Kirk insisted I text the group and ask them if I should throw back the genre. It was unanomous. Throw it back. A romance was not the film we wanted to make. And I'm so glad we did, because our 2nd choice was what I pulled - Adventure Serial. I screamed yes! and high-fived Kirk, and drew the attention of every remaining team (probably wondering what we were so happy about).<br />
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We were so happy because we were going to make the film we wanted to make. And everyone on our team felt the same way. All the pieces floated together. Everyone was stoked. It was magical. And not once did we ever think about awards or winning. It didn't matter, and we didn't care.<br />
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We didn't make any choices for our film thinking, we might win this award if we did this. Winning never matter, though, we all admitted it would be really nice.<br />
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2. Don't let your equipment stop you.<br />
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Okay, I'll be the first to admit we have some decent equipment, and some crappy equipment. We're real middle of the road when it comes to that. SO MANY teams had fabulous equipment. I'm talking RED EPICS (cameras that cost more than my yearly salary). They had cranes and real equipment! They had people that weren't ghetto rigging the tripod so the camera didn't fall off! (*cough*cough*)<br />
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We knew this going in. We knew this throughout from various tweets. While I moaned and lamented that I wanted a RED, I knew I wasn't going to have one. I also didn't let it intimidate me. I'd seen so many people with expensive equipment turn out crap in film school because they didn't know how to use it. Just because someone uses really good equipment doesn't mean their film is automatically good. If that were true, there would never be any breakout indie success. The <i>Blair Witch Project</i> and <i>Paranormal Activity</i> would not have been the successes they are. Videos shot on cell phones would never go viral.<br />
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Equipment only enhances a project. It doesn't make or break one.<br />
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And some how, with our mediocre equipment, we nailed some technical awards. (Really? How'd we end up with Sound Design?) So yeah, bigger doesn't mean better. Don't let something as silly as equipment keep you from making the film you want to make.<br />
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3. Have fun.<br />
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Ok, this sounds ridiculious, but I've consistantly done one thing every year - have fun. I love 48hfp. I have so much fun doing it. I partcipate with predominately non-film people. We giggle, push ourselves, and make something just because we want to. We do it for the love, and for the fun.<br />
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Sunday afternoon, while people hang out on the couch waiting to actually see what we've filmed, I get comments like: "I can't wait for next year." "So, are gonna continue this as a web series? Cuz I'd be down replaying my role."<br />
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I get so many people coming back to be a part of the team year after year because, bottom line is, we have fun. In the end, it doesn't matter if we win or lose. If we make a good film or not. It's the act of doing it, and doing it together, and having a good time that makes this all worth while. I don't understand the people at the kick off who stand there going "every year I say this is the last, but I somehow find myself back here." Because every year I say, "Is it 48 yet?"<br />
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When I told my friend that we'd won, she said, "Guess that means your the team to beat next year." I laughed. I'd never gone into 48hfp trying to beat the winning team. (I'll admit, I do have some imaginary grudges of people I'd <i>like</i> to beat just because.) Instead, I go in in thinking the only people I have to do better than is us. Every year we want to grow and improve and have fun doing it. Would I like to win again? Hell yes. Do I expect to or make that a priority to us? Absolutely not.<br />
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Next year, I expect everyone to be gunning for us, and I say great. If I can inspire someone to make a great 48hfp, then I feel accomplished. And if we can do better than this year, then even better! Maybe we'll win again (a first in our city). But honestly, I don't care. As long as I get to keep doing what I've been doing.<br />
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And I just hope, that next year, we pull Western/Musical.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-29837162225309847632012-08-20T10:00:00.000-07:002012-08-20T10:00:04.591-07:00Been BusySo, it's been a while since I posted a new blog update. And a whole lot has happened.<br />
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I got a transfer at my job. It's not a welcome change, and I've spent a lot of time petitioning it. However, it's a change I've had to learn to accept, and one that's eating an extra 2 hours out of my day. Needless to say, I haven't been in the most creative of mood because of it.<br />
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Then there was the <a href="http://www.48hourfilm.com/en/neworleans/">48HFP</a>. And my team, Zombie and the Brain, totally kicked ass. We pulled the genre Adventure Serial - my 2nd to top pick! And our film? Totally amazing. And now we're whispering it could possibly become a web series? There's only one way to know for sure! Anyway, you can check out the trailer below.<br />
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My writing has been a bit lacking. I have a commercial voice over script to work on. Plus, I have a interesting creative project for my job - this could be the kick-off I need to write the Library Screenplay I've been wanting to.<br />
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So, I've been busy busy! I'm thinking about starting a couple of memes to keep this blog active, but right now I'm so overloaded, my positing will probably be erratic.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-45629530253166019482012-07-23T19:49:00.001-07:002012-07-23T21:19:13.837-07:00PerspectivePerspective of yourself and your work is often the hardest part of being a writer.<br />
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For the last two weeks I've been meticulously stressing over details of my WIP. I'm not even talking about word choice (I won't even let myself go there yet.). I'm constantly doubting, and second guessing my choices. Should I pick one central protagonist? Or push forward with my feeling that there are two? Are their POVs balanced? Is my setting developed? Do I have to many additional characters? Are my main protagonists fleshed out enough? Is the romance even working?<br />
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One corkboard of index cards later, I knew I needed a new perspective.<br />
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A lot of writers recommend taking a break. Taking time off from the story. This isn't always the solution for me. When I first wrote this manuscript nearly 3 years ago, I had to put it down for some of the very same issues I'm fretting over now. If 3 years isn't enough shelf time to separate myself from these issues, no amount of time will be.<br />
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When I talk to some of my friends, they're advice is to just keep writing. Keep telling the story and worry about that during revision. Well this is revision. I have the story done. I'm trying to iron out kinks. Smooth over the rough draft. What is there to keep writing? AHG! <br />
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So I did something different. I sucked it up and sent the mess of a 3rd draft to some alpha readers - the lovely ladies I met through Camp Nano in July. Many of us writers have heard of beta readers, those wonderful critiquers who point out all the plot holes so we can cement them in. A beta reader should only be reading a draft once you've reached the point where you can see nothing wrong. A alpha reader is more or less someone who can keep you on track. Someone to run a messy draft, a preliminary idea by, that will let the writer know if she's on track or not. They offer general ideas and suggestions, knowing you're probably aware of the nitty gritty of revision you still have to complete.<br />
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So far, it has given me some perspective. I'm clearly worrying about POV entirely too much. I'm trying to pit all the rules of writing I've been taught against my storytelling instinct. Letting others read it is allowing me to get over that hurdle. Yes, my story can be successful while having 2 POVs.<br />
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Instead I know I need to focus on some world-building and exposition. Make sure all my plants are in place and clear. These are things I thought I had succeeded at, but, I hadn't.<br />
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Writing cannot be a solitary art form. This is in part due to the fact that in order to be a novelist, you need readers. I mean that's the point isn't it? The writer has a story to tell, but she needs the reader to hear it. Writing is the the medium of expression.<br />
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Locking myself up in my office and obsessing over details and lessons was becoming detrimental not only to my story, but to my mental state. I felt lost and hopeless, and all my confidence in my project ptttph out like a deflating balloon. I needed that outside prospective to keep me on track.<br />
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And this Panic! At the Disco Song to jam out to.<br />
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In honor of The<a href="http://www.thezbbc.com/"> ZBBC's new design going live</a>, I thought I'd highlight the amazing artist <a href="http://www.requiemforlost.com/">Jessica Cox</a>. I have two 8X10 prints of her mermaid designs in my office, plus 3 mini prints scattered about.<br />
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<br />I saw Ms. Cox's designs from across the room at Coast Con, and knew I desperately wanted them. <br />
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I've mentioned before how<a href="http://shannononwritingandrewriting.blogspot.com/2012/07/splash-into-summer-part-of-my-world.html"> I like my mermaids rather fishy</a>, and Ms. Cox delivers.<br />
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Ms. Cox designs more than just mermaids, and each design is just stunning. All of the pictures in this blog are for sale on her website, plus, many, many more. <a href="http://www.requiemforlost.com/index.html">Check the rest of her designs out today</a>.<br />
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In closing, I'm leaving you with this awesome video I filmed of my husband interviewing Ms. Cox at Coast Con this past spring.<br />
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<br />Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-52614762841756359622012-07-04T22:05:00.000-07:002012-07-04T22:06:17.702-07:00Splash into Summer Movie Review: She Creature<br />
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Being a filmmaker, I really wanted to review a movie for Splash. One immediately came to mind, a personal favorite of mine.<br />
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If you're reading this blog, I'm sure you can agree that the best part about <i>Pirates of the Carribean: On Stranger Tides</i> was the Mermaids.<br />
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They were cool and dark and monstrous! Totally not Ariel. Too bad it wasn't just about them.<br />
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However, they reminded me of this very neat Mermaid Horror film <i>She Creature</i> (2001).<br />
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Never heard of it? Not surprising. It was a Showtime original that I'm pretty sure I caught when it originally aired late one night in high school.<br />
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<i>She Creature </i>is set at the turn of the 20th century, and follows the tale of a side show circus that acquires a real mermaid. It starts <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001722/">Rufus Sewell</a> and a bunch of people you almost recognize.<br />
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Angus (Rufus Sewell) is the proprietor of the circus, and his lovely lady Lily (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001303/">Carla Gugino</a>) is the show's mermaid. Of course, hers is just a costume - a hoax like the rest of a circus. But everything changes when Angus and Lily ofter to bring a drunk patron home. Turns out, this drunk guy, actually has a real live, murdering mermaid! Yeah, the mermaid totally ate the drunk's wife. Now he just wants her to die.<br />
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When I decided I wanted to write about mermaids, I knew I didn't want my mermaids to look like this:<br />
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<span style="font-size: x-small;"> </span>Instead I wanted incorporate my love of saltwater fish into my creatures. I want my mermaids to be based on actual fish.</div>
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<span style="font-size: x-small;">Ok, so maybe she's based on a koi not a saltwater fish, but you get the idea.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: small;">Mermaids aren't an unusual creatures. Their imagery is all over the place, especially around any location that has water. Their image is as iconic as unicorns and fairies. Mermaids are typically visualized as top half very human and bottom generically fishy. Going outside of the box is a glitter tail and gils. Using actual aquatic inspiration for mermaid designs seems rare. I have found some, and they're based on dolphins. (I am not, nor have I ever, been a dolphin person.)</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: small;">My family has been aquarium hobbyists all my life. In fact, they bread freshwater angelfish on a fairly large scale for a chuck of my childhood. Then when I moved out, I didn't last a year before I bought a betta fish and put it in a giant martini glass.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: small;">When I got my first apartment, I set up my first saltwater tank. It was big and I kept lion fish, though I desperately wanted a Harlequin Shrimp.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: x-small;"><span style="font-size: small;">Anyway, times pass, and I get this inspiration for writing a mermaid book. Immeadately my years of fishkeeping come to me. I know that my mermaids will take on characteristics of specific fish. Razor fins! Venomous spines! Yes! I start browsing images online, looking for mermaids that resemble mine...</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: x-small;"><span style="font-size: small;">I often feel sad seeing this lack use natural inspiration. Aquatic creatures can be down right cool and weird. They have some of the craziest color combinations on the planet. I knew immeadately, that I would attach a fish inspiration to all of my merfolk. That I would drawn from all my knowledge about cool aquatic creatures. I'll incorporate razor fins and juvenile color patterns.</span></span></div>
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I promise, by the end of this blog, I'll have a Splash Into Summer tie-in. <br />
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It's the beginning of July, and the end of Camp Nanowrimo. In case you were wondering, I did not have a miraculous finish. Actually, I'm not even sure of my final word count, but I estimate it's around 30k. I am still okay with this.<br />
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This weekend, I've been sitting down with my work, backwards engineering an outline. This is exceptionally rough for me. This draft isn't half bad, but, I'm having a hard time looking at it as a whole. I kept saying, "This writing thing is hard!"<br />
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I was feeling particularly down, so I asked Twitter what I should do when it was tough to keep writing. I got the best answer ever.<br />
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It was the perfect encouragement. Something so simple, how could I have forgotten it? (I'm totally thinking of printing these words out and gluing them to the wall behind my desk. Oh, and check out the awesome <a href="http://coffeeandwizards.wordpress.com/">MegTao's blog</a> too.)</div>
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Then I read this in one of my <a href="http://thoughtsfromchelseashead.wordpress.com/2012/06/30/things-camp-nano-has-taught-me/">camp buddies blogs</a>:</div>
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There's something so profound in that statement that I nearly fell out of my chair. </div>
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Which it totally fishy, and fits right into the Splash into Summer theme! Plus, I'm gonna attempt to post a new post every day for the rest of the week in celebration of <a href="http://abackwardsstory.blogspot.com/2012/06/splash-into-summer-schedule-of-events.html">Splash into Summer</a>! Booyah!</div>Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-49552573982527138702012-06-26T18:04:00.000-07:002012-06-26T18:25:24.352-07:00Goals of a Part-Time Novelist<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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Setting writing goals is essential for being a writer. Goals that are often self induced and self enforced. Be it writing 50k words in a month or #500wordaday, writing regularly is manditory.<br />
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This month I opted to partcipate in Camp Nanowrimo, a smaller trafficed but identical competition to Novemember's 50k in 30 days challenge. I went into Camp suspecting I would not complete the 50k challenge, but hoped to get about 30k, or the 1st half of my WIP rewritten, which ever came first.<br />
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As June draws to a close, I realize that 50k is not possible for me, but I did achieve my smaller goal. So why do I feel so...unfulfilled?<br />
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At some point mid-month, it struck me that I might be able to meet the 50k challenge. I was on target; I was writing daily. What happened?<br />
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The realization that I'm only a Part-Time Novelist, for now. I don't have the time between filming and working my real job and spending quality time with my friends and family to spend multiple months of the year writing 50k. The overachiever in me is not happy about that. But I can look back at this month and say, I worked on cleaning (there was much yard work accomplished), I helped with a short film, I didn't call in sick once!, and I rewrote the first half of <em>Tails</em>. That's quite an achievement. I don't feel quite so bad about myself.<br />
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So, what am I getting at? We need to remember our priorities. Set goals that are achievable. Lofty goals like 50k in a month or 500 a day are not achievable for every lifestyle. Sometimes 100 words a week is a great goal. Picking something that's reasonable for you is what's important. Then remember to take a step back and look at your accomplishments. Reward yourself when you finish that goal, even if it was a small goal.<br />
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While yes, a full time writer can often produce 50k a month without batting an eye, I'm only a part time writer. I'm returning from Camp proudly with half a novel in hand. I think that means a cocktail, and time to finally <a href="http://abackwardsstory.blogspot.com/2012/06/splash-into-summer-schedule-of-events.html">Splash Into Summer</a>.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-52161987044127414112012-06-05T18:20:00.001-07:002012-06-05T18:23:41.125-07:00Researching in Unexpected Places<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<a href="http://campnanowrimo.org/">Camp Nano</a> is overtaking my soul. While I'm so happy to have 10K words worth of revision into <i>Tails</i> (over 5K of that through Camp), having time to go to the movies, read a book, and blog would certainly be nice. So this is my way of saying don't shoot me if I start posting irregularly.<br />
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But I have learned my 1st lesson from camp. Research may come from the most unusual places.<br />
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Since this is not my first draft, but rather a 2.5 draft that I'm hoping will be completely legible when I'm done. Pausing for research is just as valuable to me as actually writing. So when I hit my first pothole, I calmly a analyzed the best way to fill it in.<br />
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One of my characters is fascinated by electric lights. So my description of his fascination can be "ooo! electric lanterns are cool!" No, he has to caress them. Be fascinated by...how the hell do you describe a "lantern"? I think it's time for some research.<br />
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A quick google search of lanterns and I can have the whole history of lanterns, but that's not what I need. I need descriptions and diagrams. Where can I find that?<br />
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Someplace unexpected: <a href="http://www.homedepot.com/Lighting-Fans-Outdoor-Lighting-Outdoor-Wall-Lighting-Outdoor-Wall-Mount/h_d1/N-5yc1vZbvni/R-202519315/h_d2/ProductDisplay?catalogId=10053&langId=-1&storeId=10051">HomeDepot.com</a><br />
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Now, I can look at various shapes and sizes of lamps, and read little descriptions. I found words like flourish, beveled glass, mountings, and fluted details. Words I knew, but would never have applied to a lamp. I also knew what was important when describing it.<br />
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I found four lanterns I liked, and using one picture (and inspiration from 4 descriptions), I made my own description:<br />
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"He rushed towards the first [lantern] he noticed, dropping Cora’s arm and nearly climbing the wall to get a closer look. He looked at the glowing orb inside like a small sun in captured glass. His hand touched the <span style="background-color: yellow;">beveled glass</span>, measuring the heat. A test against the cool <span style="background-color: yellow;">flourished</span> Testlite mounting. Cora smiled, proud of her kingdom’s achievements."</blockquote>
I had to think outside of the box to get what I needed. Site that sell products are constantly writing descriptions of products - in an informative and marketable way. They make great sources for sticky descriptions, or just to learn terminology about something you're not quite familiar with.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-29447129121874565382012-05-28T20:26:00.000-07:002012-05-28T20:26:18.045-07:00The Social WriterThis year I'm partcipating in Camp Nanowrimo! Yay for me! I'm using the challenge to complete the rewrite (or at least make major headway) of <i>Tails</i>.<br />
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Getting ready for camp has reminded me of something I really enjoy as a writer - being social. <br />
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Once upon a time, writers were these mythical creatures who carried moleskin notebooks, smoked lots of cigarettes, and hid in dark corners of the world to practice their craft. They talked about the lonely nights of being a writer that non-writers just couldn't understand. It almost seemed as if socializing with other writers would ruin their craft.<br />
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Then, something changed. Social media developed and suddenly writers were connecting in more ways then ever. Connecting with readers, agents, publisher, and other writers.<br />
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So just maybe, this solitary writing thing is just a myth.<br />
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I have always been a social writer. In fact, my <a href="http://www.nocca.com/">NOCCA</a> writing teacher made a comment to me about it. She commented, neither negative nor positive but rather curiously, on how much I interacted with the other students, and how my interaction build a sort of camaraderie. We smiled together, chatted, and met outside of class. Our noses weren't stuck in books or notebooks, but rather talking and observing each other. All of us did just as well as previous classes who secluded themselves.<br />
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Perhaps that's why I fell in love with <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">Nanowrimo</a> - I felt connected again.<br />
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Having a writing friends is essential to my process. I take comfort in knowing that others are going through the same issues as me. Writer's block? Let's lament over cocktails. Self-pub or traditional pub? Let's debate the pros and cons over coffee. Celebrating finishing that chapter? Doughnuts and critique. Keeping me on track? Peer pressue works better than deadlines.<br />
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Throughout collage and when I got back into writing, I did it alone. I had no one to share ideas with or talk plot points out. (My husband often stands proxy, but he is <i>not</i> a writer. Answering if I should use 1st person or 3rd is just something he answers with a blank look.) It was hard. It was lonely. I felt very frustrated.<br />
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Then in 2010, I got out of my house and went to a Nanowrimo write-in. In less than two years, I have made some solid friends - friends who won't stare at my clueless when I talk about POVs. Friends that I go to the movies with. Friends that I will ask to critique something when I finally get to that point. It's these people who get me through the tough times. That keep me from giving up. I know that I wouldn't be where I am now without them.<br />
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Writing does not have to be a solitary thing (It can be, if that's how you roll.). There are tons of ways to connect: twitter, blogs, Nanowrimo, or local writer's groups. Find one that works for you.<br />
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Speaking of connecting, I'll be cross blogging over at the <a href="http://autumn-rain.org/CabinJune/">Cabin of the Good</a> Blog - my Camp Nanowrimo Cabin Blog. Check out my specifically Camp vlogs over there. <br />
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Something essential to writing is carving out a space or place to work on your craft, especially if you're trying to take it professionally. Some people steal their kitchen table and let the kids run around. Some people have an expensive habit of going to coffee shops. Most of us take what we can get. The lucky ones get her own office. <br />
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I live in a house of people coming and going. There's usually three to five people (residents or otherwise) and a puppy in my house at any given minute. It's a buzz of activity and creativity. Sometimes, this can be really frustrating to certain creative processes, such as. oh, writing.<br />
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It's not so much the noise, but rather, space. For a long while, I had a mini-writing desk/bookshelf/cheap piece of old furniture about three feet in length that was designated "Shannon's writing area." It was a sweet gesture by my husband to carve out a piece of the chaotic filmmaking/arting/writing/editing/acting world that is our house. It worked wonderfully for about...a month. Then it became the place to put all of Shannon's stuff/books/papers/jewelry, and it didn't take long before it was a piece of furniture piled under (more or less) important things of Shannon's.<br />
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At the beginning of the year I asked to have the unused upstairs bedroom/unofficially Max's room during the semister. I wanted to make it an office - a place for me to write when the chaos of the house got to be too much. And a place to put my shoes/jewelry/papers/books/craft supplies. I made the request that what I really wanted for my birthday was to have my office set up so I had a place to work on my novel revisions and a place to write for Script Frenzy. My mom came over on weekend to clear out the remaining estate crap in the room (I'm sharing my house with the remaining stuff of my grandmother's - 2.5 rooms of junque). Then, eventually, I bought a can of paint and started painting.<br />
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So, I offered beer, and many helped pitch in to paint the room and start the journey to having a writing space.<br />
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Next was a new desk and to move the bed out of the room and the futon back up. Then it fell into a lull. I started working up here around the piles of crap that needed to be moved/sorted/put away. I struggled to find time between finishing Script Frenzy and editing my <a href="https://vimeo.com/42103632">library videos</a> to finish straightening up my new office space. So I made a wish to twitter:<br />
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I come home after a very long day at the 9 to 5 and find this:</div>
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Has having an office been good for my writing? Absolutely. Having my own space (even if it resembles my high school bedroom) has given me a place to focus, to build a routine, and to inform everyone to leave me alone. I've written over 4,000 words in my new space, done a read through of <i>Tails</i>, and created a timeline for my WIP.</div>
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So, I'm going to finish this with some more mermaid painting from my new office:<br />
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Kailyn, Kailyn, Kailyn, let me count the ways I detest you.<br />
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From page 1 of my first draft of <em>Tails </em>(though, it was more like page 5 because Kailyn wasn't in the first page) I detested my romantic interest and female protagonist: Kailyn. She was vapid, whiney, meek, and more a plot device than person. There were things I wanted her to be: smart, resourceful, responsible. Then there was her - a waste of space.<br />
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In my numerous drunken rambles about my novel, I would often drone on about how I was going to fix Kailyn. But, really, couldn't figure out how. 'Can you cut her?' No, she's my Male protag's motivation. How can I get rid of her? 'Can you make her less annoying?' If only. I thought, maybe I could minimize her. I'll make her a secondary character, instead of a primary.<br />
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I knew the best thing for my novel was to slice off the first 3 chapters and start the book where Kailyn finds a nearly dead Damarion on the beach. One problem - it might lead the focus of the book to be Kailyn instead of Damarion, and I couldn't <em>stand</em> that. So I fussed over the first 3 useless chapters for two months and shelved the WIP.<br />
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So, as I sat my my computer throwing bits of 1st draft around like confetti, I started thinking. I have to start the story at that previously mentioned point. Which means I have to deal with my issues with my FMC. But first, a little procrastination. I'm do so much changing (like, solidifing the setting), I thought some characters deserved name changes. And you know what? I never really liked Kailyn for a name anyway.<br />
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Five minutes of name research and a list of 10 potential names, and popular vote had a new name for my Female protagonist - <em>Cora</em>. Ah, it brings up thoughts of femme fatales and Lana Turner.<br />
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So I started writing, and <em>Cora</em> was doing things. She was smart and quick thinking and a touch rebellious... Before I knew it, I had a new chapter 1 that I was excited about. Then I started thinking about it. Why was it so much easier to write this new chapter 1?<br />
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Because <em>Cora</em> is not Kailyn. Cora is everything I wanted Kailyn to be.<br />
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Then it came to me - I just cut Kailyn out of the book. But didn't delete the spot, I delted the character, and replaced her with someone better.<br />
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So, there's a few lessons I learned from this. 1.) Everything is in a name, and 2.) You <em>can </em>delete a character without deleting a character's role. When I started writing about Cora, I didn't think of her as Kailyn with a new name. Even a new image came to my mind as I was writing. Everything about the character just clicked in my head. Immeadately, I started referring to Kailyn as Cora. The act of changing her name allowed me to change the character because I was no longer thinking of that character. I was thinking of someone new.<br />
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And I solved one of my biggest issues with the manuscript by deleting that character I hated withouth deleting the role I assigned her. <br />
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So I think a really good trick when you're stuck with a flat character is to change up a name. It worked perfectly for me!Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-6262372216701383182012-05-10T08:00:00.000-07:002012-05-10T08:00:08.575-07:00What I did During Script Frenzy: Library VideosSo, while working on my adaptations for Script Frenzy, I did manage to write, and film 2 short promo videos for the Summer Reading Program at the library I work at. One I finished editing during April, but one didn't get finished until the beginning of May.<br />
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I think they're fantastic, considering they were done in about 2 weeks during the Frenzy, and by pretty much me. Those other people, just taking credit. ;)<br />
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So, since they're loaded to Vimeo, Blogger won't let me embed them. So here are the links:<br />
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<a href="http://vimeo.com/41385503">Children's Magical Fantasy</a> <br />
<a href="http://vimeo.com/jeffersonparishlibrary/ownthenight">Teen's Monster Movie</a><br />
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Sometime in 2010, <em>Tails </em>and I "broke-up" because I wasn't ready to edit it. I was having so much trouble with the revision (even though I knew I need to chop the first 3 chapters (11,000 words)). Then there was the little fact that in early 2010 no one would have looked twice at a mermaid/fairy tale retelling/steampunk novel. Shelving it seemed like the best idea.</div>
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Now, it's time to re-evaluate. I'm seeing a trend forming, for both steampunk and mermaid. I've developed and itch to return to this novel I wrote 3 years ago. But, a part of me really wants to stick it out and finish my WIP.<br />
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So, after much dilberation, I've decided to shelve <em>The Flamingo Princess</em> and pick <em>Tails</em> back up. I'll apply my knowledge of revision I've learned this year.<br />
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Starting with the read-through.<br />
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I knew that <em>Tails</em> was a bit of a trainwreck. Three years later, a trainwreck is an understatement. It's basically 50,000 words of me talking out a concept. Info dumps run rampant; characters devoid of personality; and a pacing that would make snails cry. So far the only thing I'm keeping from the draft is the line: The silence between them was heavy like iron. I'm ready to just stop reading, throw the whole draft in the trash, and just start writing from strach.<br />
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<em>That</em> would not be the writely thing to do. One thing I've learned from my newly sheleved WIP is the read through is essential.<br />
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So, I'm not quiting. My husband has made a very helpful suggestion: record the rest of the book as an audio book, so I can listen to it and stop looking at how awful the writing is. (He's under the mistaken impression that it's not as bad as I say it is.) So, I'm trying that (while secretly rewriting the 1st scene.)<br />
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Once it's finished recording, I'll see if I can post some of it here, and report if it was a successful tool for getting me through this first read-through.Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-565116213158493872012-04-30T20:22:00.000-07:002012-04-30T20:22:44.277-07:00Unofficial Fairy Tale Fortnight! Cinder and Shan's Top Picks<br />
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<br />So I really wanted to participate in FTF, but, alas, April is also Script Frenzy and I didn't plan enough ahead too. So, I'm going to unofficially partcipate, and those reading, check out the <a href="http://www.thebookrat.com/2012/04/fairy-tale-fortnight-schedule-of.html">The Book Rat's Fairy Tale Fortnight Line-Up</a>.<br />
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So I'm going to start my FTF post with some Food for Thought: <i>Cinder</i>.<br />
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Last week, Marissa Meyer released <a href="http://marissameyer.livejournal.com/279668.html">discussion questions</a> for <i>Cinder</i>. I didn't contribute any questions, because, well, I couldn't think of them at the time. But, being the big fan that I am (besides absolutely loving the book, Marissa Meyer is my hero), and because some of the questions I've actually discussed myself with friends and family, I thought I'd share some of my thoughts on my favorite questions.<br />
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<i> 3. Cinder has many unique abilities—the ability to detect lies, to
download information directly into her head, to overlay her eyesight
with helpful diagrams, etc. What kinds of abilities might we want to
develop from future technology? What cyborg skill would you like to have
today?</i><br />
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The cyborg question: Ok, I'll admit, this is the biggest logic fault for me. I'm assuming that Ms. Meyer has thought about this, and I just don't know the answer because, well, it's not pertenant. If there is such discrimination against cyborgs (who have really awesome super powers), why would anyone become a cyborg??? My choices are death, palatalization, or becoming something that's not even a citizen anymore? Is it really better than death if you escape death just to be drafted and killed with the plague draft??? Many stories talk about how freedom and human rights are noble - a cause worth dying for. Is a life as a cyborg really better than death?<br />
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Actually, I think that if (well, when) cyborgnetics become that advanced we will develop two social status - those with enhanced parts and those without. There will be an eletisim for those who are pure, but I can aslo imagine that would exsist for those who are cyborgnetic. I think there would be discrimination, but not a class division.<br />
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<i>4. In Cinder’s future, Earth has been conglomerated into six countries
who have formed an alliance called the Earthen Union. Though Cinder
lives in Asia (the Eastern Commonwealth), there is much evidence of
western influence (ex., the ball gowns that are made for Peony and
Pearl). Do you think this mixing of cultures is a believable result of
the Earthen Union? How do you foresee cultures changing (or not) as a
result of the increased communication and travel we have access to
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This is my favorite part of the book - globalization! This is a real socio-economic-political theory! I adored that this world considers the world as a whole, and that there are different, even if it's just slightly, factions in the world. Having one truely homegenous culture in sci-fi always, always, bothered me.<br />
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Yet, we are on track for losing the majority of our culture and beoming on homengeous community. Yes, there will still be cultural quirks, but, I do believe that influences would strech that far. I live in New Orleans, which has an alarmingly strong and not traditionally American culture, but I can see that as my generation grows, that culture is really fading and turning into the standard American culture. We're loosing our slang, our festivals, our flavor. Some of this homengenation is good, but some of it is sad. Yes, it's still here, but not like it was 10, 20, or 50 years ago.<br />
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<i>9. Was it right for Cinder to try to deliver the antidote to Peony
first, even though there were others who also needed it? Was it right
for Dr. Erland to offer her first access to the antidote? What would you
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This is an interesting question. As a writer, I know why this action worked out the way it did. Cinder is our hero. Her first goal was finding a cure for Peony. So, logicially, from a narrative POV, Peony is the only one who could recieve the antidote. When I was reading this, I didn't think anything of it. It wasn't until I started talking with someone I lent the book to that I the moral question was raised.<br />
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The reader disassociated with Cinder because of this action. She thought it was cruel and selfish of Cinder to believe that her sister was deserving of the cure when so many other were suffering. She also blamed Dr. Erland for offering it to Cinder, but Dr. Erland is already a bit of an morally ambigious character, so it was less bothersome. I hadn't thought about it that way before.<br />
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Those are my favorite questions, but there are a lot of food for thought among the questions. If you read <i>Cinder</i>, check out the questions and tell me what your answer would be.<br />
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So, this is part 2 of this post, and I'm going to list my <i>favorite</i> Fairy Tale adaptations!<br />
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1. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/11235712-cinder">Cinder</a> - Ok, so no one's surprised by this. Sci-fi, cyborg Cinderella of pure awesomeness. <br />
2. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/10271616-a-long-long-sleep">A Long, Long Sleep</a> - Another Sci-fi tale, but this one is Sleeping Beauty. There are so many layers of awesomeness in this book, I just can't describe it. But I can say, the story really starts after the kiss...<br />
3. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/7825557-a-tale-dark-and-grimm">A Tale Dark and Grimm</a> - Hansel and Gretel is just the beginning of this fun and well written fairy tale collection. There's an interrupting narrator, who makes this book awesome, and they way Hansel and Gretel are woven into various tales in unique ways.<br />
4. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2294528.Howl_s_Moving_Castle">Howl's Moving Castle</a> - So technically, not based on any particular tale, but Jones weaves her own unique fairy tale that's just as good as any predecessor.<br />
5. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/7075298-cloaked">Cloaked</a> - The most fun fairy tale mash-up I've ever read! It's a mix of the Frog Prince, and The Salad, and the Swan Brothers tale that I can't quite remember. It's a fun run, and my favorite of Flinn's books.<br />
6. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/81153.Briar_Rose">Briar Rose</a> - A contemporary retelling of Sleeping Beauty involving the Holocaust. Yolen is amazing at weaving history and fable together.<br />
7. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/397400.Black_Thorn_White_Rose">Black Thorn, White Rose</a> - A short story anthology (the only one in the series I've been able to get my hands on) that's really cool. There's an awesome "Godfather Death" story, and a frog pricne with a Sci-Fi twist, plus a chilling Sleeping Beauty...<br />
8. <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/9319268-the-sun">The Sun</a> - A very literary and poetic book, but so far the only Little Red Riding Hood I seem to love.<br />
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<br />So there we have it, my FTF forrary.<br />
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Writer's Block...I refuse to admit I have it.<br />
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So what if keep staring at that large number of pages I'm behind in Script Frenzy and not doing anything about it. Or that I keep throwing pages in the air out of frustration with the script I've been writing at work. (Why won't it just come together in amazement yet??) Or that I've waited until after the last minute to write this blog post.<br />
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Writer's block - this magical excuse that a writer's muse has vanished for a short period of time, and a writer, no matter what, cannont write.<br />
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I <em>am</em> exhausted. I work 40 hours a week (where I've been spending all my time working on 2 script for Summer reading videos, plus planning and filming said vidoes), come home, write, sometimes cook dinner, try to clean house, take care of the animals, socialize with my husband, organzine filming projects, film....I do a lot. For this last week and a half, every time I open my Script Frenzy project, all I see are the pages that are fluttering away from me and hesitate to write the next scene.<br />
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I <em>could</em> be creatively drained.<br />
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But I won't call this writer's block.<br />
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I <em>am</em> <em>afraid</em> that my script won't have the juice to make it to the 100 page mark (though, should I really be worried about that? I do have 12 pages of summer reading and mop scripts to fill with...). I'm <em>afraid</em> that my script is crap - that it won't live up to the needs I have set for it. So I keep looking at it and thinking "something is wrong." My editor wants to go back and fix it, but <em>I</em> don't even know what the problem is yet.<br />
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But I won't call this writer's block.<br />
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This is the dredges right before the end. The middle slump. The hardest part. Since I'm behind, I missed this in week 3, and am now hitting it with just over a week left of April. Crunch time is about to set in. <em>This</em> is the easiest place to give up, throw the towel in, and move on.<br />
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But I won't because I don't believe in writer's block. Right now it's my exhaustion and fear trying to convince me to take the easy way out and quit. So, I take a deep breath, a nap, and a bath and keep on trucking.<br />
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I will not give up.<br />
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So, what do you think? Writer's block, real or not?Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-40207077940707563602012-04-16T08:00:00.000-07:002012-04-16T08:00:04.226-07:00Writing by the Seat of Your Pants with...Screenplays???<a href="http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2602/3855274390_65a001c3e8_z.jpg"><img style="display: block; margin: 0px auto 10px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 460px; height: 307px;" src="http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2602/3855274390_65a001c3e8_z.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a><br /><div><div>Screenplays can be more structured than novels, short stories, prose, etc... And all screenwriting advice talks about this epic mapping of plot and beats - that you need a wall of notecards ever putting pen to paper, or hands to keyboard. Lot's of novelists give this advice as well. <em>But</em>, lot's of other novelists encourage just writing and letting the novel unfurl with minimal pre-planning. As Chris Baty calls it: pantsing.</div><div> </div><div><br />But I <em>never</em> see this advice offered to screenwriters. Why is that? Many writers are already scared off by the formatting of screenwriting, but then let's add that you need an entire month or more of pre-planning? Those looser, non-outliners run for the hills...</div><div> </div><div><br />Well I'm here to dispel this. Yes, you can completely write a successful screenplay <em>without</em> all those index cards and planning.</div><div> </div><div><br />I am a panster screenwriting.</div><div> </div><div><br />My "baby" screenplay was born of a challenge. Write a screenplay about a homicidal scrapbooking club, oh and the main character has to be gay (because the commissioner had certain parts already). Oh, and it has to include a shoe made of body parts (why?). Oh! And there has to be room for a sequel. Now go!</div><div> </div><div><br />....</div><div> </div><div><br />Script Frenzy rolled around, and I just started typing. I had no idea how any of this was going to work or who the main character was. But as I pushed forward, I started thinking and started letting the characters develop, and suddenly, I really had something. Something good. Something born without an outline.</div><div> </div><div><br />I couldn't stretch out the ending anymore, and ended up making up the last 10 pages of bonus features to meet Script Frenzy's 100 pages. After revisions (there are about 2), the final script is 90 pages. I don't plan on selling the script, because, well, my production team wants to make it. But I have shown it to people in the "biz." One said that it wasn't his cup of tea, but that it <em>was</em> really well written and solid. The producer said that it wasn't something he could produce at this time, but has since called me about a script doctoring job. I showed it to actors and a few other writers, all of whom loved it.</div><div> </div><div><br />No one said anything about pacing, or poor plotting, or weak structure. No one could tell that I didn't outline to the smallest detail, or that I made the whole thing up on the spot. No one thought for the briefest of moments that I wrote the whole thing without planning.</div><div> </div><div><br />Now I'm not saying that I don't need revisions, but even traditionally outline scripts need revisions.</div><div> </div><div><br />I have not planned out a screenplay since <em>Scrapbooking </em>three years ago. Even my current work, which is an adaptation, has no pre-planning and has gone from a short to a feature because I just sat down and started writing. And I plan on keeping it this way as long as I write.</div></div>Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-84069437392626964682012-04-10T11:51:00.006-07:002012-04-10T14:34:26.016-07:00Let's Talk About Adaptations<div><div><a href="http://static.hypable.com/wp-content/gallery/muttations-concept-art/hg_ff_01.jpg?f0f9df"><img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; width: 634px; height: 476px; text-align: center; display: block; cursor: pointer;" alt="" src="http://static.hypable.com/wp-content/gallery/muttations-concept-art/hg_ff_01.jpg?f0f9df" border="0" /></a><br /><div>This Frenzy I'm writing an adaptation of a short story about zombies and the Great Chicago Fire. I'm keeping my lips a little tight about who's story it is because my film team is about to enter negotiations for rights.</div><div> </div><div><br />This is not my first adaptation. My first attempt at screenwriting was an film noir adaptation of Grimm's "12 Dancing Princesses." My second attempt a screenwritng was an adaptaion of H.P. Lovecraft's "Pickman's Model." I've learned alot about adaptaions just from that, and with my experience level leagues higher then when I was attempting those, I'm now doing yet another adaptation.</div><div> </div><div><br />And speaking of adaptations, let's talk about the <em>Hunger Games</em>, the adapation everyone's talking about, and because I read an article about <a href="http://io9.com/5900417/the-hunger-games-wolf-muttations-could-have-looked-much-more-horrifying">concept art</a> that wasn't used.</div><div> </div><div><br />Before I even begin to start, let's set some basics down in writing.</div><div> </div><div><br />Point 1: Film and prose, be that novels or short stories, are totally different mediums. They share many characteristics, but they are quite different. Things that work in words do not work on screen and vice versa.</div><div> </div><div><br />Point 2: Readers are more forgiving than Viewers. Books can get away with slower pacing and even some plot holes without upsetting readers too much. Viewers are much harsher. Then, there's also the filmmakers in which economy of scenes, characters, and time are a necessity.</div><div> </div><div><br />My opinion: <em>The Hunger Games</em> is one of the closest book to movie adaptations, and while an excellent adaptation, its goal to remain so close to the book actually detracts from its value as a movie. When I talk about the movie, I think of it as an excellent visual companion to the book, not as an excellent movie aside from the book. This is because the movie hits every major plot point of the book, and in doing so, causing the importance of certain events to be underplayed. (Such as Rue.)</div><div> </div><div><br />There are going to be some people who think the movie is better than the book (especially those of us who found Katniss' narration F***ing annoying). There are going to be many that find the book better. I can't say if it ultimately is, but I do feel the movie means more if you read the book.</div><div> </div><div><br />Let's get to the nitty gritty. There are changes made from the book to movie. Most of them are minor, some, major, but <em>ALL</em> understandable from a <em>filmmaking </em>prospective.</div><div> </div><div><br />So let's talk about that article from earlier, and if you haven't seen/read <em>Hunger Games -</em> be warned - spoilers.</div><div> </div><div><br />When I first heard they were making the <em>Hunger Games</em> into a film, my reactions were "Hell yes!" and "How are they going to keep this PG-13?" (I had very similar reactions when I heard <em>Coraline</em> was being made into a movie.)</div><div> </div><div><br />Keeping <em>Hunger Games</em> PG-13 is an absolute must <em>because</em> this is a <em>teen</em> novel. The major demographic is teens between 13 and 17. By no means is this a children's movie, and it is certainly enjoyable to adults. But, leave the little ones at home.</div><div> </div><div><br />Let's go back to that <a href="http://io9.com/5900417/the-hunger-games-wolf-muttations-could-have-looked-much-more-horrifying">article</a> I mentioned earlier. One of the biggest deviations from the book is the Muttations at the end of the movie. Before the movie ever came out, I remember laying in bed with my husband talking about how they're going to handle the dog-people at the end of the movie. It's pretty horrifying. Dead tributes turned into monsters sent after the remainging few. How were they going to keep that PG-13?</div><div> </div><div><br />The answer: they couldn't. At least, I would bet large amounts of money that the dog creatures at the end of the movie were just dogs more for rating than anything else. (Though, it could also be because the character creation wasn't working, but the bad CG of the dogs in generally lead me to believe that it was more a rating issue.) The dogs are actually so bad, it almost takes the viewer out of the movie. Many who didn't read the book are left wondering, what the hell was that about? Those who read the book, are just plain mad.</div><div> </div><div><br />I'm going to address this in two ways: 1.) Why keeping the movie PG-13 was <em>so</em> important, and 2.) why staying so close to the book actually hurt the adaption (aka, my opinion).</div><div> </div><div><br />It's clear from the concept art that the filmmakers were intending on doing the Muttations right. Which is so cool. But, somehow, this concept didn't make it to the final cut. My best guess, ratings. It could have been poor character execution (like the reason Peeves was cut from <em>Harry Potter</em>), and it could have been budgetary (though, this was not a movie lacking in budget or profitability).</div><div> </div><div><br />If the Muttations meant an R-rating, then they had to be changed, or the profitability of the movie would have changed. Most parents wouldn't have let their teens go to an R movie, and the few movie people who just love movies, wouldn't have been enough for the movie to make back it's budget. Because we have to remember that movies are just as much a business as an art. So, to keep the rating down and keep the movie available to the <em>target</em> audience, the Muttations had to go.</div><div> </div><div><br />This leads right into my argument that the movie is too faithful to the book. Ok, I understand that the Muttations had to go. They were only impactful in the book <em>because</em> they looked like dead tributes. Now that they're just dog beasts, well, it's kind of lame. So why keep it? Because they were being "faithful." This became an aspect of the book that needed to be changed, but wasn't, and lessened it's overall impact. Why couldn't they have set the arena on fire again? Or flooded it? That would have gotten them to the top of the cornucopia and achieved the same ending. And it would have felt more natural than the weird dog things that were left.</div><div> </div><div><br />But noooo, they had to be faithful. And the movie suffers for it.</div><div> </div><div><br />So, let's look at the lesson here. When adapting a work of fiction to a movie, there has to be a balance. Keep the story as close as possible without letting the movie suffer. Acknowledge that some things just don't work in movies, and some things just don't work in print. Once you recognize that, watching a movie adaptation becomes more enjoyable. A movie can still be a good movie even if it's not 100% faithful to a book, or even 90% faithful.</div><div> </div><div><br />I am keeping the <em>Hunger Games</em> close at mind while adapting my work. And if you've always had a problem with books turn to movies, I think you should try to write a script based on that book (What a Great Script Frenzy Project!). You'll have a whole new outlook on theprocess.</div></div></div>Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4378487698368929953.post-58336537505427393812012-04-04T08:06:00.007-07:002012-04-05T20:09:51.121-07:00Let the Frenzy Begin!<a href="http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/files/scriptfrenzy-main/sf_08_logo.jpg"><img style="display: block; margin: 0px auto 10px; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 396px; height: 222px;" src="http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/files/scriptfrenzy-main/sf_08_logo.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a><br /><div><div>So besides all the numerous things that consume all my time, I've also participate in Script Frenzy - Nanowrimo's sister script writing challenge. Because of this, I've put my revision WIP on hold. At least for a month. So for all of April, I'm going to post topics that come up during the Frenzy.</div><div> </div><div><br />Today's topic: Don't be Afraid of the Script</div><div> </div><div><br />A lot of people I talk to don't want to write a script because they're afraid of formatting. And I'll admit, compared to any other form of writing save some unusal forms of poetry, scriptwriting looks like Greek.</div><div> </div><div><br />Personally, I think this is done half to scare away people from writing scripts.</div><div> </div><div><br />In a way, it's a test for industry gatekeepers. They know how serious you are because you followed the ridiculous gatekeeping format.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div>But mostly, when actually filming the script, the format works really damn well.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div> </div><div>But, thanks to modern technology, you don't have to really worry about formatting anymore! There's top of the line programs like <a href="http://www.finaldraft.com/?utm_source=Google&utm_medium=AdWords&utm_content=HomePage&utm_campaign=Exact&gclid=CKzs8OKcnq8CFZFR7AodPF9Ccg">Final Draft</a>. Then many other writing programs like <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php">Scrivner</a> offer Scriptwriting mode. Hell, even Mac's default Pages offers a scriptwriting form. And if you can't "afford" any of these programs, <a href="https://www.celtx.com/">Celtx</a> is free and available for download.<br /><br />So there is no excuse for not formatting. Now we can rely on technology to transcribe our writing into Script Greek for us, and we only need to know 3 basics.</div><div> </div><div><br />1. Scene headings - the INT./EXT. DAY/NIGHT</div><div> </div><div><br />In prose, we spend paragraphs carefully crafting setting. In scripts, we spend one line.</div><div> </div><div>INT. stands for interior and EXT. stands for exterior. Basically, are we indoors or out? (Tip: use INT if you're inside a car.) If you're moving indoors to outdoors, or not quite sure if it counts as either, just write it best you can. This is a 1st draft, you can look up the specific ruling on that after you've written it, if there there is a ruling.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div>Next, comes the where. HOUSE, CAR, CHRYSTLER BUILDING 27TH FLOOR. The actual where of the scene. It can be as brief as house, or as detailed as you want, like the 27th floor of a major building.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div>Finally, if it's important, time of day. Day, night, afternoon, morning, dawn, dusk, 3pm, etc. Time of day is really only used when it's important, otherwise, you don't really need it.<br /><br />There you have it! All of those paragraphs and paragraphs of beautiful prose condensed down to one line. Now to move on.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div>2. Dialogue<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div> </div><div>A lot of any script is dialogue. It's short and squished together and doesn't use quotes.<br /><br />Don't be afraid of it. Don't be afraid if it doesn't sound quite right yet. Just get it down, and be happy you don't have to worry about that "should I use said" conundrum.<br /><br />Hey, look, we're 2/3rds of the way through all the basics!<br /><br />Lastly, 3. Action, aka, everything else.</div><div> </div><div><br />Now that we've eliminated dialogue and scene headings, everything else falls into an Action block. This is where any description goes. (Yes, there is still description, just not paragraph and paragraphs of it.) Any silent visuals. Any props. Any movement. It's a catchall for everything that's not a scene heading or dialogue. So when in doubt, just use an action block.<br /><br />It's also a really great way to add on to your page count for Frenzy.<br /></div><div> </div><div><br />Does this cover every little detail of scriptwriting? No. Sometimes, you'll have odd little format questions. And in the real world, if it's odd, and you don't get it quite right, no one's going to notice because, chances are, they don't know how to write it either.<br /><br /></div><div> </div><div>So if you've ever wanted to write a screenplay, play, radio drama, video game, comic, anything involving scripts, get off your butt, stop using excuses, join the Frenzy, and write.</div></div>Secretly_Samushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14441898393809173172noreply@blogger.com0